Bob has crafted an email to Danielle, a sales prospect, in the message window below. Before he addresses the message and presses SEND, he thinks it might be a good idea to run ToneCheck.
To begin analyzing the message, Bob presses the Run ToneCheck button in the toolbar.
This demo shows the ToneCheck (Outlook 2007) experience.
Dear Danielle,
I trust all is well with you and you're having a great day!
I wanted to touch base to see how you are making out with the proposed materials I sent. Do you understand them? Are you ready to move forward and close the deal? I know this type of decision does not come lightly. It is time to either solidify matters or move on.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Bob
I trust all is well with you and you're having a great day!
I wanted to touch base to see how you are making out with the proposed materials I sent. Do you understand them? Are you ready to move forward and close the deal? I know this type of decision does not come lightly. It is time to either solidify matters or move on.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Bob
Your message exceeds your Tone Tolerance.
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ToneCheck has scanned your message and identified that the
following sentences are outside of your desired Tone Tolerance:
following sentences are outside of your desired Tone Tolerance:
| 1. | I trust all is well with you and you're having a great day! | Contented |
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| 2. | It is time to either solidify matters or move on. | Angry |
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Use Tone Editor to re-write emotionally-charged sentences and use ToneCheck to see the result.
This may be interpreted as: Angry
Dear Danielle,
I trust all is well with you and you're having a great day!
I wanted to touch base to see how you are making out with the proposed materials I sent. Do you understand them? Are you ready to move forward and close the deal? I know this type of decision does not come lightly. It is time to either solidify matters or move on.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Bob
I trust all is well with you and you're having a great day!
I wanted to touch base to see how you are making out with the proposed materials I sent. Do you understand them? Are you ready to move forward and close the deal? I know this type of decision does not come lightly. It is time to either solidify matters or move on.
Looking forward to hearing from you soon.
Bob
